Frivolous Comma

I’m supposed to write about an experience that made me who I am. Something that ties back to why I want to go to college and be an engineer. And I had an experience exactly like that. Problem is, the whole thing was impossible.…

She shifted back to hide behind Nnadi. Peeping over his shoulder, she could not understand why they weren’t alerting security or at least stabbing this oddly dressed stranger with the random spear she never knew her father had.…

He selects Netropolis and pierces the world's membrane. His avatar pixels into existence in a gloomy back alley. It fits here, his shark self. Riptide is a sharp, fast shadow that swims through narrow streets lined by skyscrapers lighting the night with bright neon outlines.…

Alive or dead, people were too much trouble. Look at where being a good girl landed Megan. Dead at sixteen, a random pedestrian struck in a freak car accident, the driver a woman speeding past a red light on her way to pick up her kids from school.…